Turnarounds!

Ceramics Turnaround

Version 1: I think that his face might be a little bit flat, and his stomach could be rounder to emphasise he is a chubby and loveable elf. So he looks less like a familiar Harry Potter, as created unintentionally, I think the plumpness will help. I may also alter the skin tone on my design to a more earthy tone.

Version 2: Constructive criticism that I found was that people thought my character should have a hat to pull together the carpenter feel. I think that the yellow feather adds a nice bit of contrast to the very similar colour palette, whilst bringing in the theme of creatures and nature still. I was also recommended to add a belt, but I wanted to maintain the elf's plump image, so I added the belt to the front pouch.

Animation Turnaround

For my crime themed character, I created a traditional mob boss henchman sort of character who could easily play a role in any story that I think of for my animation. I think that I would like his chest to look more square, however I think with the arms down, this will look more as I envisioned. I also think that he will mostly walk and stand straight with his hands by his side, so his more realistic convex chest will probably look better as a design overall.