I think I had a good amount of content for the deadline. I wish I had stood up and talked more, which I did from my seat half way through. I need to be more confident.
My feedback said that I could look in to the title more, even though "The Boss" works very well. Most titles for crime movies are humourous and play off of each other.
I had a well thought out story that was "charming". Apparently the storyboards seemed well thought out and interesting. Rob liked my transition from film noir to child like, using lighting and scenery and contrasting characters.
I had a well thought out story that was "charming". Apparently the storyboards seemed well thought out and interesting. Rob liked my transition from film noir to child like, using lighting and scenery and contrasting characters.
I think my own thoughts of improvement are maybe demonstrating some comic pop ups and possible ways of showing the speech. I did suggest using comic book text boxes as I'm using comic book expression symbols. So I think this would be a good experiment
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