- Centre Agamemnon and the mask in the scene!! (I didn't realise they weren't!), easy fix.
- Try getting rid of the extra texts around the mask and the spear I think it did work, but the pause on the mask and Agamemnon might be a bit too long in comparison to the others. It's a nice break from all the rush but seems long compared to the other fast paced actions.
- Change the font again. Bolder. No serifs. During my research, I didn't come across anything about san-serif fonts - not remembering a media class I once took - San serifs are easier to read. I just thought it was very against the style. And the san serif font found on a Grecian urn has a LOT of spacing. (I will use this font in the press pack though for titles)
- The current new font is Kohinoor Deranagari, which still looks taller and older, but with the 'semi bold' and san serif, it's a lot more clear to the viewer, with a slight kerning just to keep them a little apart.
- They think it looks weird that things can pass outside of the border so make it so things stop after the solid black lines I figured out that I could import an image as an import toon boom bitmap, and this would let me key frame an image and edit it inside harmony. Once I removed the middle, I was easily able to copy and past this layer in to every animation file so far so that they all had the same bits erased.
- Maybe start thinking of it as an old timey screening of the archaeologists' work instead of an urn - add a vignette, or more of one. I didn't add this one as I had already had one on the background, and I felt like some things on still frames that are very close to the edges would have been lost inside a double vignette.
- Audio is too quiet. I turned the volume up to max for this update, but it was still too quiet, even if it was an improvement. I realised by selecting an audio and pressing G you can alter the original base volume later on.
- Good timing! Much better improvement Yessss.
- Better title shot, more time for the audience to ease in to the quick dialogue and speed up with the pace. Much more establishing
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- Better timing, getting good understanding
- I think the new animation added from the last week update has good action and timing
- Very proud of all the layers and erasing that the walls rising up took.
- I seem to have chosen appropriate spots to transition between scenes, where I don't have to copy and paste as many frames and assets.
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- Audio is still quiet at this stage - my laptop must be really loud because its very clear even on half volume
- No sound effects or bg music yet
- I added a bit of a slow down on to the horse because I animated that really fast - but I think it could do with some manual retiming so that frames don't get really badly extended.
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