WWW:
- The animation fits in to the time frame assigned in the animatic
- the perspective let me change the shape of the box from a rectangle to a square which looks more minimalised for the Giffgaff style
- I tried out different animation techniques in Harmony. I used a lot more of the animation dragging and stretching rather than drawing frames at a time.
- We used more scale in this shot as Michaela suggested, with different line weights.
EBI:
- I don't really like the little lines that connect the corners of the different box faces, but I didn't know how else to make the tv look okay.
- I think the phone might have needed to appear on screen and then fall down - to give the viewer more time to notice it's a phone. But there isn't much time to work with. Maybe make it bigger?
- Some of the lines are super thin near the end of the turns, but I think it works and adds a little depth, maybe too much.
- This might be harder to colour in for Alex thanks to all of the dragged stills :(
Next time:
- If I had more time, I would rotate the box on a bit of an axel on the second turn instead of a very horizontal movement
- I'd make the tv stand disappearing a little less simple, but it worked for the speed of this. Have the tv squash down thin so the stand is pushed inside and then spring back in to shape.
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